Seemed hard to read for some reason... But was good. kinda reminded me of a little older song I'm still trying to figure out what the song means I thi...

I agree with guitar geek the begining was a little sketchy but as i kept reading It seemed to get alot better. It's nice I like it.

it's good I like it alot.

Pretty good. I like it. Would love to hear it once it's made a song.

Ok pretty good poem. 2 things I think I would change but if don't like it it's fine everybody has a diffrent opinion.but your infectious laughter caug...

wow. that was really good Jaqui. thanks alot. i'll use those suggestions i real like them. thanks you taught me a little more about how to write a goo...

me personaly I didn't like it. it didn't seem that great to me.I believe it was yours that I read once I like it alot better than this one.

I Liked this alot heres 2 things in my preferance that would make it better.just in the first verse to go like so I whisper in your ear, Can't you hea...

Really like the flow of the song but I Agree with +LostBeggining+.

Thats was really good I liked it alot. I really like the second verse(If thats the verse). except for the very last line not sure what it is but when...

It was ok, I guess. but i didn't understand why did you spell Cuz like Coz in my preferance it made it rhyme and flow alot worse and I cant, go on th...

I really liked this poem but yes the bridge didn't quite have a flow i'm not sure if this is any better and i'm a newbie at this whole thing but read ...