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Tokai 12 String
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Joined: May 22, 2004
Topics: 19 / Replies: 103
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RE: Coopersville

Hey nitetrapperNice little song, is this sung with a country kind of feel??reminds me of a song my buddy wrote call girls (claims he wrote it when he ...

20 years ago
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RE: Shattered love song

Hey nitetrapperUnfortunately I shorten the lines, they just won't fit the chords, I have tried and it really throws my playing off, not that it would ...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG2-week 43-Portia-with MP3

Hey PortiaNice song I particularly like these linesa glittering conquest awaits as I rise and I glimpse my future across the skies it's on the horizon...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG2 - week 43 - untitled!

Hey StratchNice song, I'm a sucker for a simply love song.but I think Narn is right on the mark about the chorus.Just my opinion( well actually it's N...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG 2 Week 43 A Flag on a Moon - Ja'mir

Hey Ja'mirAnother wonderful piece. Scratch said Favorite lines: "Madmen and dogs howl at my face" "...flags and footprints cover my face" (although, i...

20 years ago
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RE: week43 "(Colours with)Extra Sheen"

Hey, blueI've read and re-read this for ten minutes I've read the comments that olav and vic have postedbut I just don't understand this one I am clue...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG week 43--Lonely Night

Thanks for the suggestions I have made a few changes to the chorus, however the verses will have to remain as written (they fit the simply chord patte...

20 years ago
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RE: Week 43 - Put You in The Ground

Hey NarnI did rhyme that but I don't find that to be offensive. It's not like your being vulgar, well maybe a little but its not like you're really sw...

20 years ago
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RE: Week 43 - Put You in The Ground

Hey NarnNice piece of work. I like every thing about it exceptWhat did I ever see in you. But a quick and dirty (s@%#%).I just can't get a rhyme here ...

20 years ago
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RE: Shattered love song

First let me thank you for taking the time to comment on this song, and I will try to answer your questions. sozay...yes I can sing this to myself......

20 years ago
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RE: week 42 "Warmth and shifting colours regardless" &

Hey BlueLike Jamir, I find the first song hard to read. as for "followed the headlights"this made more sense to me when I read the note at the end.I ...

20 years ago
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RE: SSG year 2 week 42 - Fire and Ice - with MP3

Hey JamirWelcome BackThis is absolutely BEAUTIFUL, FABULOUS, WONDERFUL, GREAT...ETC. ETC. ETC.I love every single line. I can't wait to hear this one....

20 years ago
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RE: SUNDAY SONGWRITER'S GROUP - Week 42

Welcome back BobI hope all is well.

20 years ago
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