Hey nitetrapperNice little song, is this sung with a country kind of feel??reminds me of a song my buddy wrote call girls (claims he wrote it when he ...
Hey nitetrapperUnfortunately I shorten the lines, they just won't fit the chords, I have tried and it really throws my playing off, not that it would ...
Hey PortiaNice song I particularly like these linesa glittering conquest awaits as I rise and I glimpse my future across the skies it's on the horizon...
Hey StratchNice song, I'm a sucker for a simply love song.but I think Narn is right on the mark about the chorus.Just my opinion( well actually it's N...
Hey Ja'mirAnother wonderful piece. Scratch said Favorite lines: "Madmen and dogs howl at my face" "...flags and footprints cover my face" (although, i...
Hey, blueI've read and re-read this for ten minutes I've read the comments that olav and vic have postedbut I just don't understand this one I am clue...
Thanks for the suggestions I have made a few changes to the chorus, however the verses will have to remain as written (they fit the simply chord patte...
Hey NarnI did rhyme that but I don't find that to be offensive. It's not like your being vulgar, well maybe a little but its not like you're really sw...
Hey NarnNice piece of work. I like every thing about it exceptWhat did I ever see in you. But a quick and dirty (s@%#%).I just can't get a rhyme here ...
First let me thank you for taking the time to comment on this song, and I will try to answer your questions. sozay...yes I can sing this to myself......
Hey BlueLike Jamir, I find the first song hard to read. as for "followed the headlights"this made more sense to me when I read the note at the end.I ...
Hey JamirWelcome BackThis is absolutely BEAUTIFUL, FABULOUS, WONDERFUL, GREAT...ETC. ETC. ETC.I love every single line. I can't wait to hear this one....
Welcome back BobI hope all is well.