Hey gmilamDon't know how I missed that. :oops: Consider it done.

Thank you for your commentsscratchmonkey said is that there are a few places where you could correct spelling or grammar. I've check my spelling 3 tim...

Hi Bramble Welcome to GNYou said Do your worst:P I like the idea for the song, but ...I think you need to make some changes. Verse 1--- What was stup...

Hi pixnstringsWelcome to Guitar Noise.First I'd like to say that I like what you have written, but in my opinion I think that you have some extra word...

hey bstguitaristNot much to say about this except I too like it.And as Vic said it's a pity you couldn't work the "where have you been" line at the en...

As everyone has said this is a good startThe only thing I want to change so far is the word "loser"...or tell us why you're a loser in her eyes. Why ...

Nice pictures. I also like the decal on the martinbut another thing caught my eye was the two pictures of Roberto Clemente behind the Ibanez. Are you ...

Hey CeltVery nicely done, wouldn't change a thing. even though I thought after the first read through that you had repeated the chorus too may times,

Thank You This one may even be finished soon, got the chords for the chorus figured out...I think, but simplfied the chords for the verses. hope to ha...

Hey VicVery nice song, Very positive outlook from a very negative place.There is a tiny possibility that this song may actually be used on the soundtr...

Hey Vic You convinced me I chane my ways...HonestGood song,just another fine job, love the chorus_____________________________________________________...

Hey hurricaneI like the idea, but the last verse needs reworded how some thing like this.so if you see the tinkerman try not to pass judgement you onl...