Was it the Crickets? No... that was Buddy Holly's band. Dang... I'll think of it.

Bummer. I loved the Mamas & the Papas. This is sad.

Just plain outstanding, John. I like that the whole story is told. I loved the MP3.

Wow - tough one this week, Bob....it'll take me a few days to work out what my favourite story is.... I know what you mean. I have quite a few favor...

True confessions: I haven't listened to the MP3 yet. I wanted to read it through first, then I'll see how wrong I was.Initial thoughts, the line:"To...

Chefie,I love this one. "And I wonder" at the end of each stanza really comes over nicely. The progression from wondering what else could be, to rea...

Erotica, Fantasies fill my headNothing here for me to dreadSuper models and super starsFast women and faster cars Dang man, whenever I remember my ...

...but no doubt it sounds better with music and being sung to the tube you have in your head .. DrunkRock,Do you really have a tube in your head?! :...

Vic,I can certainly see this as a blues number. Although, I also agree with Celt and Barnabus Rock; -- Tom Waits and "Sunday Morning Coming Down". (...

Hi Chefie,I'm along the same line as everyone else. My first thought was that the lines were a bit long, and could be tightened up a bit. But the co...

Hilch, Bob, Olav,Thanks for the welcome back, and the accolades, it's very encouraging.David,It's probably just me, but this sounds a little warmer th...

Redpoint,I usually have a melody rolling around in my head while I'm working on the lines. I'm not as musically accomplished as most folks in here, s...

Vic,I had the same thought about the chorus. -- Putting it at the end. The reason I didn't, is because I *really* wanted to get something (anything)...