Hey VinThis seems a little short, but I like the story.W.F.P.E. :wink:

Hey VinI like this as niterapper said It makes the listener think and use his mind. and in my mind these lines sum it all upNow she can't stay, but s...

Hey VinHow do you simplify something that was already simple???????????Aug 31 they fit the simply chord pattern I've been toying with for three or fou...

Hey NarnThank You

Hey VinI do like the revised version better the first version didn't seem like you at all(well at least the you I used to know) lets here the finishe...

Like the song(I'm such a man of many words)

Like the song and like everybody else I love this line Shes got this lunar thing goin' Her moods they change like the tide I only wish my ladys mood w...

I listened to the MP3 nice song a little heavy on the bass though will be looking for the cleaned up version.

I really like your style this is another great song, you really have a way with words.

Can't add any more then what has already been said,except to say in the first verse and chorus I though how does he know me so well... :shock: :lol:

Jamircan't say anything somebody hasn't already said except for...in this verse below, for a lack of a better definition, they have destroyed each oth...

I would like to thank you all for your comments, even though my first song post was a collaborative effort.Hey CheapThrill, You didn't miss Fist inste...

hey TokaiNice job, only have one question and one commentIs the guitar your Gibson L6S ???I always thought there was something between you two. LOL :l...

Hi Beren just want to say good job (on a subject that definitely need addressed)the only thing I don't like is the chorus at the beginning of the song

hey bluenoteI like the revised version, but I think you repeat the chorus to often, maybe you could lose every other one.