Hi VicGood way to break your duck - tons of scope and possibility with this one - look forward to hearing it.Good to see you back here writing againBo...

Hi PeteSomebody once asked 'Why do the British talk about the weather so much?' and was answered 'Because we get so much of it.' It makes for a conve...

Hi PearlDefinitely a good start here - the two lines that David mentions just need to act as a closing line to the verse - something about spring and ...

Hi KathyI love this. The references are not so parochial that only the populations that celebrate them understand them - the merging of cultures on a...

Hi manonthesideDefinitely catches the mood of a missed summer. Some good suggestions from David to certainly follow up on but definitley a good start...

Hi NeilSpot on for the assignment - a great lament of the passing of summer. MP3 is good as per usual and vocal style is spot on for this kind of son...

Hi StraycatCan't argue with the writing as there are some great images in there typical of what we've come to know and love you for but does challenge...

Hi RayVery good take on the assignment - great MP3 worth listening to again and again. Great sense of humour on display which puts across some of the...

Hi JohnThis is very JJ Cale like, kind of reminds me of a song of his called Magnolia - very smple in structure and with the same vocal style.Really g...

Hi StraycatGood start, rich and full of imagery - some is contradictory though and last man standing/face in the dirt is an example.I like the idea of...

Hi CorlenyaGood to see you here - hope to see some writing soonWelcome aboard.Bob :wink:

Hi JohnThis is good work- just a few lines here and there that are difficult to fit in with the rhythm I was playing to it.Otherwise though I really l...