Hi Straycat#1 Seems to be the more developed of the pieces and certainl is within your normal style. I reckon a bit of time persevering with it and yo...

Hi Pete#1 Definitely the last passion throes of a relationship dying when there's the final spark before the flame is snuffed for good. That's what t...

Hi Slowplay#2 Is so good. The last line probably was pointed out in that assignment as quite weak but when heard with the music it doesn't jar at all...

Hi CeltThis is exactly what I was hoping for fromthis assignment. Something you were unable to work with being turned around giving you somehwere to g...

HI DRMaybe this is my liberal senses coming to the fore here but I get images of a police state crackdown with this song, I guess it's in the listener...

Hi EllenI love this the MP3 is raw and exciting and I love the rhythm you've got going on it's fantastic. You can cheat all you want on those chords ...

Hi TrevDefinitely agree with what was said in the other replies - consistency and development being the two key themes.Definitely a good start and one...

Hi PeteGreat song, it picks you up and carries you along it has that feel and pace to it. I hear it as a John Cougar Mellencamp number - the first li...