Wow, the forum has been pretty slow lately - over a week and still no one has posted on this (and it is still at the top). Well, it's good - nice sou...

ight be a bit too experimental but you could have a singer tell a life story and when they talk about childhood, they sing like a 5 year old....then t...

Let them sing it for you? Interesting websight, good for a laugh... I'm guessing soon that's were all pop music will from. Funny how with even a sin...

yeah, James, I struggled with that "axiomatic blues" line, not really communicating what I wanted to say...zap, pow, gone (well, in a couple seconds a...

"This is crap." Wow, Ken, don't be so hard on yourself! :lol: Yeah, this is a good song... funny how people are talking about the different imagery t...

Hey, I understand moving. I let that be my excuse for not submitting in like... 15 months? Ouch, sounds bad when I count it out. Well, even our lei...

wow, James was thorough with his possible rhymes... I think that by the end of the song I'd be throwing out the salt and going straight to the worm. ...

Nice. I especially liked this verse: There's a lot I have to say,When they ask me for my last words,I'll speak about injustice,And how how nobody hea...

Hi, I'll throw a couple thoughts in... kind of in line with James' question. To me, the song sets the tone of an overbearing tyrant, except for the f...

Suggestions for the number of syllables – I only found it awkward on 2 lines, really.“Technology umbrellas the modern man” - start singing this...

Yowsers! I like it... you've got so many lovely layers in here... reminiscent of Magical Mystery Tour album, but definitely not overdone. Great prod...

solid, yo

very nice James