Great stuff Vic, really enjoyed listening to this one. ( A bit biazed I always like your songs)Two comments if you re record it on your list of things...

Hi'aI really like this bit Immortal Lover Makes her heart pound on her chest Blood races and trickles down her breast Drained but still burning with p...

OK I've listened to the song and read all the comments ( after hearng the song) In my opinion , I would leave the first verse out altogether and sta...

Hi'a Well this is a pretty "dark" song and as I don't know your style of music i am not qualified to comment on the lyrics, but you could called it ...

Hi'a Sctrach,Lots a fun to read but as it is only a draft I thought I'd give my 2c worth, hope you don't mind, but it was such fun to read. !!!!!!!! ...

Yip have to agree with the crowd, excellent reading and very rhythmical .Can't think of any constructive crit at all to make it better!I like it a lot...

Hi'aI like the idea here but am battleing with the very long lines. and complex timing structure. This is only a problem if you sing classic ballad or...

Excellent advice.Like that idea A dream within a dream, the living never know Asleep or awake, and yet we'll choose which way we go? Sounds much bet...

Thanks for the comments guysWell this year is officially try and put some decent music my lyrics year.So Celt you are right ....... it doesn't gel me...

I am busy re recording it and will let you know when it has been up loaded ok

Hi'a Traver, Maybe your overall volume is low, can't seem to find a problem on my PC. If I get others with the same problem I will send it up again.Th...

Hi'asorry for the delay with this but as they say"LIFE HAPPENS"you can listen to it here and as always comments are always appreciated.Go wellJa'mir

Hi'a Thanks for this words Chris, I'll take that as a huge compliment as she is one of my biggest influence Very Joan Baez. Will have to see what me...