Regarding the line "You're alone tonight"... after reading Paul's comment on it, I may have been wrong about where you were going with it. If you're ...

Hey Pete,Like Joe, I thought this was pretty good. Simple and straightforward... which are not always bad things. If there are some lines you don't ...

Just a quick note about the 'inspiration question'...I find that I need to, on average, block out about one or two hours to sit and play with the guit...

It's good to see a song, Bob, and a good song it is.I like your twists on father's day, especially the second one: That was my father's day Yeah, a ...

Hey Pete,Yeah, powerful, I agree with Vic. I could feel the intensity in the choruses with 'Daddy'.Also, like Vic, I had trouble with that one line, ...

Hey Trev,This is good. Clear; stays on track; honest.Perhaps Vic's verse might make a good addition rather than a replacement to the first verse. Th...

Hey Trev,Good stuff. The rhythm of it is great.Like Vic, I thought the story rolled out perfectly. Of all the songs of yours I've read, I think this...

Hey Vic,This is great. I love the scope of it, 4 generations. A powerful tribute.My only quibble is with: He taught you well, God knows we'll miss h...

Hey Doug,This is really good story telling. I'm guessing you're going for something up-beat ( Vic's suggestion would be great ). You can't go too mo...

Hey Jeff,Very nice song. I love the conversational feel to the lyrics. Like Joe, I really love the line "I only mention it in passing"; it's like so...

Hey all,Thanks for the replies.Doug, that "bail" line is genius. I went with "Guess I'll find out if you come and post my bail". I have a hard time ...

Hey Trev,Nice work. I've got to confess that I'm not up on my sports lingo, but I'm assuming that "preferred lie" is a football term? Is there any s...

Hey Neil,This is a great song. It stays on track all the way through until the end where you turn it around ( "from defense to offense", I guess woul...