Buy me a ticketThe obvious tack is boy meets girl, girl leaves boy, boy wants to be where girl is. It could go the opposite way; 'you want me to leav...

A Critical ErrorThis one is a bit sterile for me... I write software for a living, so I see the phrase 'critical error' several times a week. I like ...

Stingy BrimI had no idea what to do with this one until I read everyone else's comments. Now this one is my favourite. I'm reading the phrase to mea...

Hey, JoAuSc, welcome to guitarnoise.Thanks for the suggestions. I'm having trouble figuring out how the "e, b e b e e f f# a f# f#, a f# f" is suppos...

I was caught by the image a girl alone playing solitaire in your first chunk of lyrics, so I wrote a potential chorus. I steered clear of the knight ...

I took a shot a setting #3 to music.Warm breeze blows in off the lakeAnd the moonlight isDancing, dancingDancing, dancingHeaven is the hand that I hol...

Hey everyone, thank you so much for the feedback. I'm glad you liked it.Pete and Joe, yeah, thanks for letting me know that I'd captured some intensi...

Hey Neil,Great song and great recording ( I'd never have guessed you were recovering from a hand injury ). That's very catchy. Usually with a song w...

Hey Joe,Yup, I get to take credit for the original title. I was pretty sure when I posted it back in '05, that if anyone was going to tackle it, it ...

Welcome Mr. Blue Eyes,Great start. I think this verse is very good.Pencilled in achievements and bubblegum gradesMy CV looks a-bit of a jokeWhy did I...

Hey Trev, you've touched a nerve. You've made me both smile and cringe at the same time.Just listened to it, and I think you'll probably want a bridg...

Hey Paul,Good stuff. Yeah, it is like Pete's but its a very different person dressing to impress. Your person is using appearance for curb appeal, n...

I guess I'm having trouble seeing it like that, since in my experience, any woman willing to wear a short skirt and a tight top will always find a suf...