Hey KalleThanks for the reply. I knew you would come through. Anyway I woke up 4am this morning thinking about it and knew I would not get back to sle...
Hilch/BarnabusThis is really good. I'd like to say I would like a chorus, but I am not so sure If it really needs it. When I sung it in a Dylanish mel...
JarnushThis is great stuff. Very well doneOne thing I noticed is the length. By the second chorus I was ready for you to wrap it up. I would suggest t...
KevinFirst of all welcome fellow Marylander. Glad you are joining usNot knowing anything about the music you had in mind my suggestions may butcher yo...
CeltLOVE IT. Great lyricsAll I can say is I second Vic's suggestion of “Get out of MY kitchenâ€Blessings. Olav
HilchNot much I could ad that has not been said, just a couple of comments. I did also pick up on the inconsistencies in the rhyme pattern, however in...
ScratchI like this…very touching. Hope the girls will appreciate this one day. I got a little girl on the way so I sure did! Good to see you back ag...
I like it. Nothing I can add to whats been said.Looking forward to read more of your stuffBlessings. Olav
Pbee Very nice. Meter, rhyme pattern, lyrics, all excellent. If I could put my finger on one thing, it would be that there was not a whole lot of v...
TrevorFirst of all thanks for sharing, and please know most of us have that ghost in the past we are not to proud of, but they all amount to who we ar...
Marv.This is some great stuffIt kind'a got me in the same mode as I get in when I hear Telegraph Road with Dire StraitsYou sure did a great job puttin...
Scratch.Yeah, I like it tooThe only thing I would have done different is that I would have tried to rearrange the chorus so that “Savior†and “F...